77 Terminal System any thoughts?

[MTN-Freerider]

This one made me feel like I was back in college running around with a K1000 and a rool of 400tx.

I was using a 50mm lens, manual focus.


I was using a desk lamp and a white piece of paper. I may just do a re-shoot, but the transition from chemical process to photochop can be a touch one, I think it may need a little tweeking.

Anyway tell me which one you like. Maybe give a little advice.

http://static.flickr.com/101/293462107_d101fa749e.jpg?v=0


The comp on these ones are pretty much the same kjust little difference in focus, editing, etc.

http://static.flickr.com/103/293462115_12a13a4538.jpg?v=0

http://static.flickr.com/120/293462112_fa90d8a533.jpg?v=0

Comp is actually a little different on this one, look closely.

http://static.flickr.com/102/293462108_186814b880.jpg?v=0


Any questions, comments, suggestions?

[nalvarez]

I like the second from top the best, but the box color seems to be lost with the background white color. Perhaps this can be adjusted. Good work!

[Richard]

I think the first shot is the strongest. If you can reshoot, I would try to also have the trigger in focus.

Cheers,