Rachel

[Photosbychuck]

All C & C welcome

Thanks,
Charles Cassidy,
http://www.modellocate.com/action/goto/uid=4447

[rosselliot]

there's just not that much spectacular about this photo. she's centered in the frame of a square photo. she looks washed out, and nothing is truly in focus. I'd have preferred a closer crop and at least most of her in focus. try, off-center, tilted head, looking down, or pointing nose down and looking up at you or something like that. you can take these "look into the camera" shots, but try a TON of other poses too.

- RE

btw, it's not like it's terrible, those are jmust my opinions!

[fcorin13]

My advice? Crop it a lot closer around her head. SHe gets a little lost in the background. Maybe a B&W version? I like this portrait, but think it needs alittle something to make it stand out. Otherwise, it's just a typical portrait.

[thdizzy]

http://gefillmore.smugmug.com/photos/108744077-L.jpg

Little over-processed (noise, hue, etc) but definitely an improvement in the right direction.

[thdizzy]

sorry-no mona lisa by me from a 140kb pic-

I stand corrected :D

[judah]

hey chuck-

hope you don't mind me working on this-

if you do, I'll take it down-

btw, pretty lady-

http://gefillmore.smugmug.com/photos/108744077-L.jpg

Wow! I must have my LCD out of calibration! :D