New to Photography - please comment

[Bazzauk]

Hi everyone

Not long taken up photography. Took this picture over the week end. The settings were as follows:

Focal length 18mm
Exposure f/8
Metering Partial
Setting JPeg


Has anyone got any comments….be as honest as possible please.

Regards

Barry

[Antonio Correia]

I like the picture but I would try a tilted one with the hole building in the frame.
Good composition.
Regards
:thumb

[ballentphoto]

Hi everyone

Not long taken up photography. Took this picture over the week end. The settings were as follows:

Focal length 18mm
Exposure f/8
Metering Partial
Setting JPeg


Has anyone got any comments….be as honest as possible please.

Regards

Barry
Another thing you could do would be to crop the bottom railing and alarm box at the bottom of the frame. You want to eliminate clutter :wink Overall I like it :thumb

Also if your camera supports it and you have the software you should give RAW a try... it is a little more forgiving, and Jpg

[DavidS]

Interesting subject and perspective.

[mrclark321]

Nice shot Barry but a little too large for my monitor.

Dan

[Bazzauk]

Thanks for your comments. Will as you say crop the bottom and see how it looks. Thanks again

[Bazzauk]

I like the picture but I would try a tilted one with the hole building in the frame.
Good composition.
Regards
:thumb

Thanks for your comments. Will take them on board.

Thanks again

[Scott_Quier]

It appears to me that you cut the top of the building off. I would offer the suggestion that, on the re-shoot, you attempt to give the tip a little breathing room or crop well below the top if that better satisfies your intent.

[Bazzauk]

Thanks...i will give that a go.