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rjpat
Oct-04-2006, 07:09 AM
My youngest son was over this weekend to have some protraits done.

The whole family:
http://rjpat.smugmug.com/photos/99966893-L.jpg

Just the girls:
http://rjpat.smugmug.com/photos/99966780-L.jpg


C&C is always welcome.

nonilady
Oct-04-2006, 05:29 PM
i luv the 2nd shot, they look adorable !..the 1st one, your daughter in blue didnt look at the camera lens just like the rest,,,,but still a nice family pic :thumb

thanks for sharing

Owen
Oct-04-2006, 06:02 PM
Burn out the background - the creases are distracting!

Scott_Quier
Oct-05-2006, 03:16 AM
I also like the pose of the second image - very cute, feels almost spontaneous.

What would I do different to improve the shots?

The lighting is very nice. You were quite successful seperating their heads from the very dark backgroun. For my taste, the light may be just a touch too balanced?:dunno Some slight shadow can make for a more dynamic image.

The only real problem I see is the 3 older people appear to be floating heads. There is no discrimination between their upper body clothing and the backdrop.