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ginger_55
Sep-24-2006, 02:58 PM
http://upacreekPHOTOGRAPHY.smugmug.com/photos/97636381-L.jpg

Oh, info:

20D camera
Spring 2006
f 5.6
400 ISO
1/500
EV -1

Thank you in advance,

ginger

SloYerRoll
Sep-24-2006, 04:02 PM
After looking at the shot for a second. I finally realized what was hapening.
Very cool action shot.
Critique:
The action gets lost in the shot. I would recommend a tight crop on the action. I won't go into cropping details since I've seen your work and you know what your doing.
Creating a little more blur where the water is so you don't see the jagged edges will also help the keep the focus on the shot since you can already tell you captured motion. No need to see it in the water.

Great shot as usual Ginger.

Cheers,