Challenge 27 - Shadows - please critique! ... pretty please ... [Sitemap]

Head in the Clouds

Dec-02-2004, 03:09 PM

Sorry for beggin' .....

What do you think? I'm thinking its perhaps a little boring. Might have to reshoot without the wheelbarrow in the back ground!?!!......

Any suggestions very welcome. :D

"Morgan's shadow"

mgound

Dec-02-2004, 03:53 PM

I like the shot but I think it should focus more on the shadow. I took a stab at a different crop. I hope you do not mind

(I hated to crop out the face of such a gorgeous baby)
Your floors are fabulous!!

Mitch

Head in the Clouds

Dec-02-2004, 04:05 PM

Thanks Mitch. I know what you mean. I cropped it as much as I thought to try and get it so that it was just the 'object' (baby) and the shadow. I agree, not quite 'shadowy' enough......
back to the drawing board. thanks for taking the time :clap

lukiedukie

Dec-02-2004, 04:22 PM

I like the shot but I think it should focus more on the shadow. I took a stab at a different crop. I hope you do not mind

(I hated to crop out the face of such a gorgeous baby)
Your floors are fabulous!!

MitchI like the croped version-very nice

ginger_55

Dec-02-2004, 05:29 PM

I like the cropped version, too. The shadow falls in just the right place to dominate, doesn't it? I notice it.

And the little hand adds a lot, IMO

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Sam

Dec-02-2004, 06:04 PM

Sorry for beggin' .....

What do you think? I'm thinking its perhaps a little boring. Might have to reshoot without the wheelbarrow in the back ground!?!!......

Any suggestions very welcome. :D

"Morgan's shadow"
Don't be sorry about begging........................It's a real treat to hear someone besides me doing the begging........oh...ah....wrong forum. :D

USAIR

Dec-03-2004, 01:58 PM

I like it good shot
I also like Mitch's crop version

Thanks
Fred

wxwax

Dec-04-2004, 12:31 AM

I tend to agree that the shadow doesn't dominate. Also, the bright stuff is overblown. It's a shot that has a lot of good things in it, but would be better if it were recomposed and the exposure was set to handle the bright light. Then the shadow would fall into place.

Head in the Clouds

Dec-04-2004, 05:29 PM

Ok - What about these?
This one the focus is on the shadow ......

Head in the Clouds

Dec-04-2004, 05:33 PM

This one the focus is on the caterpillar .....
what do you think? ...... :dunno

mgound

Dec-04-2004, 05:36 PM

I actually like the one with the creature in focus better. Very nice.

Interesting creatures you have "down under"!

This one the focus is on the caterpillar .....
what do you think? ...... :dunno