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Nir
Nov-21-2004, 12:15 AM
This was my first try; 18th Century, Italy

http://niralon.smugmug.com/photos/11495393-L.jpg

Shakey helped me understand this wasn't exactly suitable for "in my house".


Then I tried My Favorite Corner;

http://niralon.smugmug.com/photos/11496835-M.jpg

But it is lacking a special angle to make it unique. This is my widest lens Mike, and I have difficulty here with angles because it is on the edge of the staircase going down to the basement.


This 'morning ritual' came to mind; Sugar, Milk and the Morning Paper;

http://niralon.smugmug.com/photos/11619486-M.jpg

But I'm not extremely happy with it either.


Also tried for geometry in Staircase;

http://niralon.smugmug.com/photos/11619491-L.jpg


Finally got the next which really hits the nail on the head in my perception of my household - TEAMWORK and I Get To Clean Up Afterwards;

http://niralon.smugmug.com/photos/11619494-M.jpg

But does it 'speak' to anyone out there?

I would really appreciate more of your comments and help in making the 'critical' choice :dunno
ginger_55
Nov-21-2004, 04:29 AM
Yes, Nir, I really like it, shows the living going on, and somehow the whole thing works, IMO, as a composition. Too bad there isn't something in hebrew on the wall, I think that stuff is so cool. Interesting shot of your paper, but for "knowing you" I would go with the people and the kitchen. (It is a gamble)

ginger
mgound
Nov-21-2004, 05:24 AM
Beautiful Family!
lynnma
Nov-21-2004, 08:00 AM
Nir the family shot speaks to me :D I really like it a lot:clap
Nir I just looked at it again and I'm not sure it's level... and no I'm not joking... seems it may just tilt a tad and now I can't see it I can't remember which way...


to the left??
aero-nut
Nov-21-2004, 09:59 AM
I love the family shot! That really seems to capture the "household" activites. :clap
Nir
Nov-21-2004, 10:12 AM
http://niralon.smugmug.com/photos/11619494-M.jpg

Thanks guys for all your comments!! This IS what my house 'feels' like!
Lynn, level or not, makeup or not (:wink ), this one is "no photoshop".
miketaylor01
Nov-25-2004, 08:58 AM
I like the family shot the best. You were able to portray your family very well.:thumb