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Red Bull
Jul-02-2006, 11:27 PM
I have 2 photos that I am thinking of submitting. This will be my very first challenge. Here is the first one.

http://redbull.smugmug.com/photos/78975057-L.jpg


Here is the second.

http://redbull.smugmug.com/photos/79056076-L.jpg

Comments and suggestions welcomed.

adrian_k
Jul-03-2006, 12:27 AM
the first is the better of the two - although I'd boost the saturation a little - funfairs are bright & garish and this looks a little washed out.

The bystanders & the 'evolution' posts are too distracting in the first.

I have 2 photos that I am thinking of submitting. This will be my very first challenge. Here is the first one.

Comments and suggestions welcomed.

Antonio Correia
Jul-03-2006, 12:54 AM
The 1.st picture is very nice.
I do like it very much.
:thumb

sayntbrigid
Jul-03-2006, 01:53 AM
I like the first one very much also :clap:clap:clap

Jeffro
Jul-03-2006, 03:47 AM
http://redbull.smugmug.com/photos/78975057-L.jpg


I think this is a great choice, looks petty good on my screen, maybe just a tad washed out...maybe. Overall it's a winner!:thumb

ultravox
Jul-03-2006, 06:08 AM
First one is a classic. :clap I like it too.

Charbu
Jul-03-2006, 09:20 AM
I like the first one too. I would however try and tone down the bright spot the light has created in the center and crop the right side in so that the yellow equipment doesn't show and you can focus on the folks better. I love fair shots, lots of colors and action.

Red Bull
Jul-03-2006, 09:31 AM
Thank you for the suggestions, everyone. How's this?

http://redbull.smugmug.com/photos/79258103-L.jpg

trossnagel
Jul-03-2006, 09:31 AM
I absolutely love these shots....both are fantastic and I would not change anything - I personally think they are just fine, as is.

If I had to choose one - I would go with two - there's something about it to me, the isolated blur focuses my eye and makes me concentrate on just that - BLUR!

Great work...

Red Bull
Jul-03-2006, 07:50 PM
I fixed the fixed photo.:rofl I made it a bit lighter and tried to make the big light in the middle a bit less bright. Also, instead of cropping the yellow post on the right side, I made it a bit less bright and bold. Comments? Suggestions?

http://www.smugmug.com/photos/79381338-L.jpg

davev
Jul-03-2006, 10:20 PM
Well, I see that I don't have to enter this challenge. :D

Your first shot, the fix of the fix is great.:thumb

chandi
Jul-06-2006, 10:49 AM
I made it a bit lighter and tried to make the big light in the middle a bit less bright. Also, instead of cropping the yellow post on the right side, I made it a bit less bright and bold. Comments? Suggestions?

Fantastic :clap
Great picture to begin with and nice post processing fixes too - a nice finished product!