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ehughes
Apr-15-2006, 09:52 AM
From a shoot last weekend. Let me know what you think.


Ok, fair enough, you didn't like that one... I'll see what else I can come up with..
Andy
Apr-15-2006, 10:38 AM
I dig it, but what's up with the school-girl skirt? Seems cheap to me. I'd like it muuuuch more with a better outfit.
Owen
Apr-15-2006, 10:57 AM
Her expression isn't sexy nor is it comfortable... the socks and skirt... :dunno

I would also like to see this in a wider angle so you can see the whole bike and the plane.

I looked through the gallery and this (http://www.edhughesphoto.com/gallery/1350247/1/63759202) is a much better pose & shot of the model IMO. It's a similar "trying to be sexy but really forcing it" expresison.



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ehughes
Apr-15-2006, 11:47 AM
I dig it, but what's up with the school-girl skirt? Seems cheap to me. I'd like it muuuuch more with a better outfit.

Thanks, and well, when the guy that owns the company that you are shooting for picks an outfit, that what you shoot..
ehughes
Apr-15-2006, 11:48 AM
Her expression isn't sexy nor is it comfortable... the socks and skirt... :dunno

I would also like to see this in a wider angle so you can see the whole bike and the plane.

Thanks Owen..
snapapple
Apr-15-2006, 04:31 PM
I find myself wondering what you are selling. If it's the bike, it should be all in the picture. If it's only the girl, then I guess it's OK. But, she sure looks contorted. I think legs together like Betty Grable would be cuter.
saurora
Apr-15-2006, 05:54 PM
I would prefer to see all of the front end of the bike and the plane regardless of what the photo is selling. Maybe a wider lens was called for. The pose seems awkward and is unflattering to the model's left leg in particular. I can't imagine any model wanting her legs to look that chunky! Do you have any other angles to post?
Sam
Apr-16-2006, 08:22 AM
ED,

This is way different then your Yosemite pictures! I think you did a very good job. If this is the first time you tried this I would say fantastic job!

Just keep pressing the shutter button.

Sam