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landrum
Oct-09-2004, 08:41 PM
I haven't had much time to work on this project this week (no pun intented!) I saw this driving on Friday, and saw "The Effects of Time"... Any input? :dunno

http://landrum.smugmug.com/photos/9599544-M.jpg

judyfuess
Oct-10-2004, 09:42 AM
Interesting idea!! I like it!

wxwax
Oct-10-2004, 10:24 AM
It's a good idea. Since rust is the thrust (!) of the picture, I'd find a way to emphasize it, both in the color and the composition.

tmlphoto
Oct-10-2004, 10:49 AM
It's a good idea. Since rust is the thrust (!) of the picture, I'd find a way to emphasize it, both in the color and the composition.
I believe some lab curve steeping might help the punch up the colors.

landrum
Oct-10-2004, 09:04 PM
Okay. This one I punched up the curves and contrast to pull the rust out more...

http://landrum.smugmug.com/photos/9646934-M.jpg

And then I played around a little more with cmyk channels...

http://landrum.smugmug.com/photos/9646944-M.jpg

What do you think of these??

landrum
Oct-15-2004, 11:03 PM
Maybe one of these...?

Art Time:

http://landrum.smugmug.com/photos/9905074-M.jpg

or Time For A Bath!

http://landrum.smugmug.com/photos/9905073-M.jpg

Any more input???

photocat
Oct-16-2004, 12:23 AM
[QUOTE=landrum]Maybe one of these...?

I like your first redo with the boosted contrast. The second redo is a bit overdone for me.
The first redo really makes the tubes pop, it fits perfectly in the context of time if you ask me.
The rust brown colors are attractive. Beauty in the scrapheap...

FreeUps
Oct-16-2004, 07:06 AM
Landrum, definately go with the first Redo of the pipes. Colors are rich, looks really good. Nice contrast against that green grass.

landrum
Oct-16-2004, 11:13 AM
Thanks for your input...I agree with the first color correction too. :thumb

lynnesite
Oct-16-2004, 03:06 PM
Thanks for your input...I agree with the first color correction too. :thumb

me too, it fixed the blue cast to the image too!

Lynne