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3rdPlanetPhotography
Mar-19-2006, 05:24 AM
Everyone meet Julie, she didn't want the same ole traditional photo like everyone else gets so we took a shot a something different.
http://3rdplanetphotography.smugmug.com/photos/60487963-M.jpg
http://3rdplanetphotography.smugmug.com/photos/60491973-M.jpg
http://3rdplanetphotography.smugmug.com/photos/60495365-M.jpg
http://3rdplanetphotography.smugmug.com/photos/60484799-M.jpg
http://3rdplanetphotography.smugmug.com/photos/60484044-M.jpg
http://3rdplanetphotography.smugmug.com/photos/60487508-M.jpg
What a day of fun.
Scott_Quier
Mar-19-2006, 06:18 AM
These are good!
FWIW -
#1 I really like the first one - seems to show a lot of personality. Like the colorization of the ring.
#2 Crop some/all of her legs out of the image.
#4 Crop this just above the break between the her top and her pants. A little distracting.
Oh, and forgot to mention that the fill light on the outdoor shots looks, to me, to be spot on:thumb
wxwax
Mar-19-2006, 09:53 AM
Great project, Scott. On your B&W's it looks like you left lots of room on the right side of your histogram. IOW, they're slightly underexposed. Easy to fix in post.
binghott
Mar-19-2006, 11:19 AM
i really like #1, but i'm not a fan of the selective coloring of the ring.
rahmonster
Mar-19-2006, 03:47 PM
I would crop closer on the last one, but I also really like the first one.
3rdPlanetPhotography
Mar-20-2006, 03:32 AM
Thanks everyone for the feedback :thumb
Owen
Mar-20-2006, 08:38 AM
The shots are technically good, your fill flash is excellent, she's a pretty girl but..
"she didn't want the same ole traditional photo like everyone else gets so we took a shot a something different."
I don't see anything different about these, though. Nothing edgy, nothing making them stand out. :dunno Also, I would work on her skin, as it appears a bit ruddy in most, especially the B&W shots. Don't make her fake, but atleast make these photos something she wants to remember and keep for the rest of her life. I would go for more contrast on the B&W shots, too. Make them stand out!
This guy is amazing, and he uses the same gear you do.
http://www.danbrouillette.com/
Maybe you can get some inspiration!
W.W. Webster
Mar-20-2006, 12:06 PM
Everyone meet Julie, she didn't want the same ole traditional photo like everyone else gets so we took a shot a something different.Number 1!
robert mccane
Mar-30-2006, 09:49 AM
nice:):
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