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RocketMan
Sep-16-2004, 10:19 AM
Headed back to old town Alex. yesterday to try a few more.
A blue doorway
http://roadrunes.com/images2/c-21/Door-way.jpg

some guy hanging around at 5:30 under the lamp post (real freindly and cooperative i must say :D and hamdsome, too!)
http://roadrunes.com/images2/c-21/shopwindow-1.jpg

Here he is again, in this one i purposely tried to give it that "old timely" look, like back when the world was all B&W (and shades of brown)
http://roadrunes.com/images2/c-21/lamppost-1.jpg

and just for fun

http://roadrunes.com/images2/c-21/mirror-1.jpg


RM

ginger_55
Sep-16-2004, 10:23 AM
The second one, good.:thumb Needs a bit of work, but straight up. I don't know what.

Someone will tell you, am on the run.

ginger

snapapple
Sep-16-2004, 01:37 PM
I like these Rocketman. I like the detail you were able to capture in the third one. I'm not sure about the redish color. Hmm, I actually think I like it. The man doesn't look as relaxed though. The lamp on the right is kind of bright and the trash behind it is also distracting. Maybe a crop?
Back to the second one - The composition is a little more simple and I like the nice white light. The problem I see here is that the shadows are real black. Can you bring out some detail in the man's face and other completely black areas?

RocketMan
Sep-17-2004, 08:46 AM
Thanks for the input Ginger, Snappy and company , think I have my choices narrowed dwon totwo now touched up the first pic from my first thread as shown here

removed a bit of the green and brightened it up a tad
http://roadrunes.com/images2/c-21/boat-2-1.jpg

and tried to put a bit more detail in this one from the second posting without blowing out the white, then added the circular lens effect to center the subject. Think it may be a bit washed out now, though.
http://roadrunes.com/images2/c-21/man-lamp-2.jpg
Don't if that works, but I figure no harm in trying stuff out, nothing like learning from your mistakes, right??:D

I'm leaning toward entering the boat pic, but we'll see...

RM