graveyard

[ankit]

Okay, I think I am ready for my first whipping... Lets have it :):

http://ankit.smugmug.com/photos/49834432-L.jpg

[1ibandit]

This picture doesn't seem to be a grave yard. Maybe more like forgotten headstone or something like that.

Maybe changing the DOF to blur what is around the stone you are focused on would help (the forgotten headstone theme). The greens of the grass really over power the headstone.

I see a stone wall in the background with headstones infront of it. Maybe try a shot there.

All in all a nice picture, but it needs more to pull me in.

After looking back again I think to bring this picture home change it to B&W.

[gus]

Looks a bit oversaturated on the grass. Basically the shot is pretty empty for me. You have a lot to use there so i would start with some afternoon or maybe early AM light & then extend the headstones to B&W...i always like B&W in graveyards.

Try some diff angles ...place the camera on the ground & shoot up at the headstone or something maybe...