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cybercrypt13
Nov-20-2005, 07:29 AM
Ok, let me have it... :-)
http://www.gshutter.com/photos/41428300-L.jpg
LeDude
Nov-20-2005, 08:28 AM
I like it very much overall. A couple things I notice as needing work: Too much sharpening? And, it's probably the angle from which you shot but it looks to me like you need to rotate 2-3 degree counter-clockwise. My theory is that at slight angles, where you don't get a sense of depth anyway, it makes sense to level the shot digitally since it is disconcerting when it is slightly "off."
edit add: I also notice that the tree is blending into the house quite a bit... at first I thought I'd like to see some differentiation, but now I think it adds artistically - the old home 'rejoining nature' as it rots and crumbles, so to speak.
cybercrypt13
Nov-20-2005, 08:32 AM
I like it very much overall. A couple things I notice as needing work: Too much sharpening? And, it's probably the angle from which you shot but it looks to me like you need to rotate 2-3 degree counter-clockwise. My theory is that at slight angles, where you don't get a sense of depth anyway, it makes sense to level the shot digitally since it is disconcerting when it is slightly "off."
edit add: I also notice that the tree is blending into the house quite a bit... at first I thought I'd like to see some differentiation, but now I think it adds artistically - the old home 'rejoining nature' as it rots and crumbles, so to speak.
Thank you very much. great critique...
illuminati919
Nov-21-2005, 07:37 AM
I think the composition is great and the colors, other then rotating it a little bit I think it is great.
You should convert it to black and white, I'd really like to see that, maybe repost it. :D
cybercrypt13
Nov-21-2005, 12:42 PM
I think the composition is great and the colors, other then rotating it a little bit I think it is great.
You should convert it to black and white, I'd really like to see that, maybe repost it. :D
I guess I'll have to wait until next week to do that. I got in trouble for posting more than one picture. I guess the 1 picture per week is a good idea but things seem to move really slow in here as a result. Anyway, I'll maybe post it again later as black and white...
Thanks,
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