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chrisjlee
Sep-17-2005, 05:53 PM
Sorry if people have already seen this. But i thought maybe i'd post my images here and it'd be more appropriate.

http://static.flickr.com/32/4409868...pg?v=1126988059 (http://static.flickr.com/32/44098684_f7ab3352a2.jpg?v=1126988059)
1

http://static.flickr.com/25/4409869...pg?v=1126988411 (http://static.flickr.com/25/44098694_8c8940bcd9.jpg?v=1126988411)
2
http://static.flickr.com/24/44104960_5ded6a44df.jpg?v=0
3
http://static.flickr.com/24/4409865...pg?v=1126988481 (http://static.flickr.com/24/44098659_a43135c6b3.jpg?v=1126988481)
4

There are more pictures in my flickr photo stream (http://www.flickr.com/photos/chrisjlee), but I personally think they aren't as great as these four pictures that i will print and give to the model for our TFP agreement.

I just would like comments and criticism to help me improve things.
DavidTO
Sep-17-2005, 07:12 PM
They could all benefit from more post work, read up on this forum and you'll get lots of ideas.

In the first her head is turned just a touch too far, occluding the far eye.

I might crop the top of the second, just a touch.

I'm not crazy about the composition or expression in the third. It's close, but her ear is just a bit too close to the edge of the frame, and her expression looks just a bit pained.

The fourth is nice, but again could be helped by a tighter crop, IMO. There's too much space up top.

Keep posting!
ScottMcLeod
Sep-18-2005, 08:01 AM
They're good, but I agree with DavidTO, tighter crops, and try to get in on a little less-angle to her face. The shots look kinda stressed/forced, pose and expression wise...

Keep it up, shoot, re-shoot, and post more :thumb
chrisjlee
Sep-18-2005, 10:21 AM
They're good, but I agree with DavidTO, tighter crops, and try to get in on a little less-angle to her face. The shots look kinda stressed/forced, pose and expression wise...

Keep it up, shoot, re-shoot, and post more :thumb
You mention the expressions are forced. what kind of things could i do to make shots feel more natural. (I cannot judge well if the shot looks forced)
XO-Studios
Sep-18-2005, 11:36 AM
You mention the expressions are forced. what kind of things could i do to make shots feel more natural. (I cannot judge well if the shot looks forced)
rather than retyping the whole thing

http://www.dgrin.com/showpost.php?p=162671&postcount=7

Try it, it really works.

XO,