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billberuldsen
Sep-15-2005, 03:39 PM
:): Hi all. I'm looking for some critique on my photos. Please check out the pics in the "favorites" down the bottom of the front page in the Keywords section.Check out some of the galleries too if you like.Nothing too serious, just tell me which one(s) you like and why.Constructive criticism also welcome.
I'd really apreciate it if you could leave the comments under the picture(s) on the actual site.Thanks.
http://www.billyinjapan.smugmug.com (http://www.billyinjapan.smugmug.com/)

Here's a few example pics:
http://billyinjapan.smugmug.com/photos/32906577-M.jpghttp://billyinjapan.smugmug.com/photos/4644219-M.jpghttp://billyinjapan.smugmug.com/photos/4609328-M.jpghttp://billyinjapan.smugmug.com/photos/32906542-M.jpg

ian408
Sep-15-2005, 05:54 PM
Wow!

Several very nice shots here. But The Whipping Post is meant to critique
no more than one picture a week.

If you select one photo and present that for critique, it would be most
appreciated.

Ian

Dach
Sep-16-2005, 12:21 PM
I think I know exactly where pic #2 was taken. it looks like it's just north of Shijo-dori in Kyoto, about four streets west of Kawaramachi-dori. If I'm right, just to your left in the picture is a Tonkatsu restaurant that's really good.
Okay, I know this has nothing to do with photo critiqueing, and if I'm out of line about that, I apologize. But just so I'm not completely off-topic, I like the composition, but the geisha seems a tad overexposed compared to the rest of the picture.

PossumCorner
Sep-18-2005, 05:44 AM
Bill is that Swifts Creek and 90 Mile Beach in Australia, or Japanese counterparts?? I really like the two shots with the child, the head over the fence and the dog, except that the dog's legs being cut off takes away from it, sort of distracting from the whole. They are linked by looking the same way - maybe someone they know walking up the road - and you have to wonder why she is up on the fence when there is a perfectly good gate open - . A lovely moment.