B&w

[jcana]

A black and white shot

[marlof]

I like the atmosphere in the image, where the outside world is bright and light, and the inside world is dark and moody. But there are a few things that caught my attention: the image is skewed a bit. That's fine if you want to go for a "snapshot" look, where the framing is less important than the image of " sneaking a shot". Next to that, the person in the front is a little too dark to my taste.

[spider]

A black and white shot
I like the mood - great b&w composition. I hope you don't mind, but I lightened up the girl a little with PSE. I felt that part needed a little more detail.

George

[wxwax]

Dang, I didn't even realize there was a person there when I saw the first version of the shot! Kinda dark on her, at least on my monitor.

Personally, I'm not sure that the window isn't too dominant. :dunno