DSS #42 - 'Off Season'

[MikeK]

A local skate board park caught my eye the other morning. Always lively during the summer, but incredibly desolate in January.

Honest thoughts?

Does the title: "Off Season" work, or do I need to be explicit with "Skateboard Off-Season" to clarify what the ramp is?

http://www.bourbonstreetphotography.com/photos/766615261_iT8y2-L.jpg

[NikonsandVstroms]

A local skate board park caught my eye the other morning. Always lively during the summer, but incredibly desolate in January.

Honest thoughts?

Does the title: "Off Season" work, or do I need to be explicit with "Skateboard Off-Season" to clarify what the ramp is?



I love the subject, as for what to do maybe if you went for a vertical framing you would have more freedom, I just feel it is very compact trying to get the quarter pipe and fence in. In my opinion giving them more room to "breath" and cropping part of the ramp. The reason I am saying this is the side, snow, and fence (which I love the lighting) are the strongest points so just focus on them.

[MikeK]

Thanks for the feedback. Good point, going vertical does make sense here.
How's this work for you?


http://www.bourbonstreetphotography.com/photos/767424832_pbgLj-XL.jpg