View Full Version : DSS #42, C&C please
rutt
Jan-15-2010, 06:31 AM
http://www.ruttpix.com/photos/765174825_2kHqD-XL.jpg
I have a few more candidates from the same shoot. See this thread. (http://dgrin.com/showthread.php?t=156082)
divamum
Jan-15-2010, 09:09 AM
Rutt, IMO the first one in your other thread is the home run as a photograph despite its lack of faces. Needs no title which this one would, IMO - because the subject is currently topical and you mentioned it in your other post, I know immediately what this one refers to, but it doesn't HAVE to be relevant to Haiti; we need to know that to put it into context. The first shot says it all without anything else needed.
Powerful stuff.
ETA: I saw your date title after the fact. That does of course put it in context, but I think even more descriptive might, in this context, be appropriate.
JerryBarton
Jan-15-2010, 11:10 AM
As others have said (in this and the other thread), the caption is important here. The first and the last tell a very moving story. The first takes a bit of study. [But isn't it great that such systems exist that can help people find their loved ones?]
rutt
Jan-15-2010, 02:09 PM
Here, as straight as I can be:
At the Haitian Crisis and Relief Center, Boston 14 Januarly 2010
Does that work with the picture I posted at the head of this thread?
lizzard_nyc
Jan-15-2010, 02:48 PM
Here, as straight as I can be:
At the Haitian Crisis and Relief Center, Boston 14 Januarly 2010
Does that work with the picture I posted at the head of this thread?
Yes it certainly does.
photo-funtasia
Jan-16-2010, 03:10 AM
Here, as straight as I can be:
At the Haitian Crisis and Relief Center, Boston 14 Januarly 2010
Does that work with the picture I posted at the head of this thread?
Powerful!
Flyinggina
Jan-16-2010, 05:41 AM
As you already know, I love this picture. In fact I like it much more for the challenge than the first in the series as posted in the PJ forum. Part of that is because I personally don't care for big blurs in the foreground of photographs - recognizing that this is my own limitation and that it is not shared by others.
But part of it is that this picture tells a story in emotion not in words. It grabs me without knowing the story behind it. Knowing the story just makes it more powerful.
As for a title, I'd go with your long one. If this were appearing in a newspaper or on one of the news outlet's photos of the day series, the context would be identified. A factual title such as the one you propose is appropriate. It does not dilute the power of this photograph as photojournalism.
Virginia
richtersl
Jan-17-2010, 06:50 AM
This is a wonderful shot. I saw it last night and could not stop thinking about it and wanted to let you know that.
You captured the haunting expression in her eyes perfectly. :clap
mblonde
Jan-21-2010, 06:40 AM
Haiti or not this image speaks of loss in general and what it looks like. Nice shot
Tango
Jan-21-2010, 06:43 AM
emotional, and a great entry!
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