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lilmomma
Dec-30-2009, 04:48 PM
needs tweaking..open to suggestions. does the concept work?

http://www.melissakayser.com/photos/753446252_dPLNH-L.jpg




Mods: can you change the title to DSS "#41" Thanks!
darkdragon
Dec-30-2009, 05:16 PM
Very cute, I think it could use a background. Like a closet or something (just the hint of one in the oof area)
MarkR
Dec-31-2009, 05:02 PM
Bravo! Very cool. :thumb
anonymouscuban
Dec-31-2009, 07:26 PM
Love it. I agree about the background.
morgan20
Jan-01-2010, 07:15 PM
brilliant, refreshing and perfect. Don't change a thing! :clap

needs tweaking..open to suggestions. does the concept work?

http://www.melissakayser.com/photos/753446252_dPLNH-L.jpg




Mods: can you change the title to DSS "#41" Thanks!
sscotty
Jan-02-2010, 08:13 PM
Fabulous. My favorite 41, so far. Don't change anything. I think the background is perfect just the way it is. . . I love how it floats from the foreground. Great job.
lilmomma
Jan-03-2010, 09:03 AM
I have an idea for something to be in the background, i'll at least try it and repost. Thanks!
dlscott56
Jan-03-2010, 06:24 PM
Love the concept, composition, lighting. Great one! I think that changing your background would be distracting. I'm saying this without having seen what variations on this shot you come up with so my opinion could change.

Only nit is that the 'other' shoes lightly out of focus bothers me a bit. Not sure why but I think all of these, along with the doll missing the shoe, should be in focus.

Excellent shot!