PDA

View Full Version : First e-session using off camera flash!


JohnnyNapalm
Nov-23-2009, 06:33 AM
I think the results are pretty good, but judge for yourselves. Any CC appreciated as always.

1.
http://www.scottryanphotography.com/Proofs/Sam-and-Brett/IMG8421/723406167_kdtnK-X2.jpg

2. (flash behind the wall)
http://www.scottryanphotography.com/Proofs/Sam-and-Brett/IMG8455/723417267_THQzn-XL.jpg

3.
http://www.scottryanphotography.com/Proofs/Sam-and-Brett/IMG8465-2/721504139_iMMS6-XXL-1.jpg

4.
http://www.scottryanphotography.com/Proofs/Sam-and-Brett/IMG8610/721458990_vttgu-XL-1.jpg

5.
http://www.scottryanphotography.com/Proofs/Sam-and-Brett/IMG8564/721445616_FMZap-XXL-1.jpg

6.
http://www.scottryanphotography.com/Proofs/Sam-and-Brett/IMG8542/721439737_E9y2K-XL-1.jpg

7.
http://scottryanphotography.smugmug.com/photos/721279006_vHR8t-X2.jpg

D'Buggs
Nov-24-2009, 12:55 AM
The facials pretty much all need some fill. The eyes are dark.
Keep it up! :wink

Darren Troy C
Nov-24-2009, 02:56 AM
I would have to agree, especially the first. The comps and colors are great, however.

JohnnyNapalm
Nov-24-2009, 05:30 AM
I would have to agree, especially the first. The comps and colors are great, however.I may have to notch my brightness down on my editing PC, because I noticed this at work. On other monitors, though, they look fine.

JohnnyNapalm
Nov-25-2009, 10:17 AM
This set was my first time working with the exposure brush in Lightroom. Long story short, I was shortsighted, and edited their entire heads with a negative exposure, including the eyes. I've fixed that and edited the OP. Here's to learned lessons, the hard way!