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lynnma
Jul-15-2005, 06:35 PM
comments?? :dunno

http://Lynn.smugmug.com/photos/28530898-L.jpg

kudbegud
Jul-15-2005, 06:43 PM
thats pretty kewl lynn. the thing that distracts me are the dark blobs in the cut-out areas, but you may not have had control of those

Sandy
Jul-15-2005, 07:49 PM
I agree, it is a cool photo, but I too think it could be stronger.

pathfinder
Jul-16-2005, 08:44 AM
comments?? :dunno

http://Lynn.smugmug.com/photos/28530898-S.jpg

Great subject :thumb Now have your SO hold a black or a white sheet up behind it as a background and hit it with a little side lighting!!

erich6
Jul-16-2005, 09:17 AM
I agree with the commments so far. This is a good subject and the image has a lot of potential. If you can't get back to the place and reshoot you may want to crop tighter and get rid of the base. Also some selective burning might help.

Erich :thumb

Davidoff
Jul-16-2005, 10:24 AM
I agree, very nice. Could you shoot it from the front, with a slight angle ?