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rahmonster
Jul-15-2005, 12:46 AM
Good? Bad? Try something different?

Looking for critique on this one thanks in advance. Just an idea that jumped in my head quickly today.

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v514/rahmonster/photography/14thjuly05036copy.jpg
photocat
Jul-15-2005, 01:14 AM
I like it... Is it a shell? Love the warm color in the background to line off the curve. Great shot I say
BigAl
Jul-15-2005, 01:17 AM
Nice idea, but the dead space at the bottom bugs me. Maybe twist the pic somewhat so that the horizontal line on the left of the pic becomes more diagonal and heads for the corner :dunno

regards
alan
rahmonster
Jul-15-2005, 03:42 AM
Another try...The first shot isn't a crop by the way, I was discovering the macro functions of my camera...:D
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v514/rahmonster/photography/14thjuly05036copy2.jpg
photocat
Jul-15-2005, 04:57 AM
looks great... it seems to be a lot bigger then my simple garden snale.
Nice colors again, the soft orange touches a string...
I love the macro function...
erich6
Jul-16-2005, 09:57 AM
I like the second try much better. Nice geometric curves and color hues. You may want to try fiddling with saturation controls and see how it looks.

Erich