C&C Please

[Sam]

Just playing around.......does this work at all?

Thanks?

Sam

[adbsgicom]

It is interesting but isn't really doing anything for me. Not sure why not. The white background seems a little distracting, perhaps. Perhaps someone who really loves watchworks will have a better take on it.

[Wil Davis]

I think it would look better if everything was clean and precise. It looks like trying to be two things: 1) technical drawing-type precise X-Ray transparent-layer views of innards of watch; 2) old, weathered document / faded-photo type thing

…and to me, it ends up being neither :dunno

Too much info! :huh

…but each a neat idea, though :thumb

- Wil

[Sam]

Thanks,
I had the same idea but wanted get another opinion. I think Wil nailed it.

Sam