Masha

[Yuri Pautov]

Masha
1
http://yuri.pautov.ru/images/gallery/8634.jpg
2
http://yuri.pautov.ru/images/gallery/8633.jpg
3
http://yuri.pautov.ru/images/gallery/8631.jpg
4 Just to show you whats around my model while session, I decided to post this one:
http://yuri.pautov.ru/images/gallery/8635.jpg
5
http://yuri.pautov.ru/images/gallery/8636.jpg
6
http://yuri.pautov.ru/images/gallery/8638.jpg

Spasibo,
Yuri

[Mr. Quiet]

1...Somehow she is not very comfortable in this one. Her eyes look like they are staring at right in to the lens( which is good), but shouldn't be more like...looking into the lens instead of staring?

2...Nice pose....but below her collar bone level it looks a bit blown, it kind of blinds me really:-) The chair makes her hip jut out in the wrong place:rofl it looks like there is a stick stuck horizontally under her dress..... No disrespect intended sir....

3...I personally like this one best. I think you could add more contrast over all though? What is that U type mark on here lower lip, can you clone that out?

5...I don;t know what to say about this one.....

6...Does not work for me. She seems like she is cold or something. Very nice skin tone though.

I almost for got...very beautiful woman:-)

[adbsgicom]

Nice work Yuri.

#1 I like her look. She looks confident and the chairs in the background have an air of business that works well. The picture is slightly rotated through -- don't know if that's what you want there.
#2 Like how you set this one up. Agree w/ Aaron that her chest seems too bright here.
#3 is beautiful
#5 I really like. The only nit is that I think I wish all of her hair on the camera-left side was coming down. I looks like most of it was tucked up behind her ear, and just a chunk is coming down. Still I think the pose and expression is really wonderful.
#6 feels tilted off to the right (same as #1). I get what you wanted with the pose, and she does have a wonderful profile. Not sure about the way the light hits her forhead here, though. Is that the desired effect?

Nice work, and thanks for sharing. Also thanks for showing how you are set up, that is particularly helpful to those like me who are learning...

[Mr. Quiet]

I just had to post again....Over all, I think you did a great job with the lighting and skin tones. Sorry if I sounded a bit to harsh...

[adbsgicom]

Did I say something wrong?
What do you mean?

[Mr. Quiet]

What do you mean?

I edited the post. I think I was a bit to harsh?

[Yuri Pautov]

Mr. Quiet! Thank you so much for such a detailed critique!
Yuri

[Yuri Pautov]

Andrew, your critique is always very helpful - thank you!
yuri

[tortillatorture]

nice set! the nr2 is gorgeous, love the colors.

[Mr. Quiet]

Mr. Quiet! Thank you so much for such a detailed critique!
Yuri

hehe, guess not:clap:thumb

Thank you for sharing. I always want to see more of your shots, but you don't have a website, as far as I can see....Which is not very far considering I can't even see past the screen:D