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NeilL
Oct-05-2009, 08:18 AM
http://neilal.smugmug.com/photos/671014673_DSvdM-XL.jpg





Canon 40D, 24-105mm f4L
Tarout, Saudi Arabia

Neil

Azzaro
Oct-05-2009, 08:32 AM
That is a great capture Neil......:clap azzaro

Mav
Oct-05-2009, 08:37 AM
That is a great capture Neil......:clap azzaro

What he said :thumb

Really great colours too!

Richard
Oct-05-2009, 10:20 AM
Excellent timing. It made me smile. :clap

rwells
Oct-05-2009, 03:19 PM
We're all up in the air over here too about the center boys shirt, but that's a hole different post. :huh



Nice timing and I do like your processing on this shot :thumb

Dogdots
Oct-05-2009, 07:05 PM
You caught the fun these boys were having -- excellent :thumb

justThorne
Oct-08-2009, 03:45 PM
The upper center window might be a bit too crisp - it would better match the leftside one - but fundamentally, you've achieved a really timeless image (outside, perhaps, of the AIG shirt - I do not know WHAT is up with all those). Love the look and feel of it. And especially how the leftward youngster is walking on air, creating a useful "is that real?" wobble in the viewer's mind.

NeilL
Oct-09-2009, 12:15 AM
That is a great capture Neil......:clap azzaro

Thanks for your encouragement, Azzaro!

Neil

NeilL
Oct-09-2009, 12:18 AM
What he said :thumb

Really great colours too!

What I said to Azzaro, and glad you like the colors!

Neil

NeilL
Oct-09-2009, 12:21 AM
Excellent timing. It made me smile. :clap

Thanks, R! But careful about smiling too wide, wouldn't want cracks to start appearing in your avatar!

Neil

NeilL
Oct-09-2009, 12:28 AM
We're all up in the air over here too about the center boys shirt, but that's a hole different post. :huh



Nice timing and I do like your processing on this shot :thumb

Well, there's a saying about living above your means and getting too big... Guess it came around!

Thanks for your comment, Randy!

Neil

NeilL
Oct-09-2009, 12:29 AM
You caught the fun these boys were having -- excellent :thumb

Thanks for your appreciation, Mary!

Neil

NeilL
Oct-09-2009, 12:47 AM
The upper center window might be a bit too crisp - it would better match the leftside one - but fundamentally, you've achieved a really timeless image (outside, perhaps, of the AIG shirt - I do not know WHAT is up with all those). Love the look and feel of it. And especially how the leftward youngster is walking on air, creating a useful "is that real?" wobble in the viewer's mind.

Yeah, I always noticed that window, but it didn't touch a nerve until you mentioned it. You are right. I'll blur it to match. I wanted to get the pic to look like a ballet performance on stage (my original title was 'Elevation', a ballet term) and so I wanted the wall behind with its drawn-on goal net and graffiti to look like a painted backdrop. I found masking out the figures and ball was not going to be successful, so after tone work and applying some filters I desaturated the wall using Nik Viveza. The result was somewhat successful in separating those three figures away from the background and making of them a little dynamic system, while still sharing the theatricality of the rest.

This was a rather heavy crop, and so I was up against resolution limits very quickly. That showed most in the faces, so I brushed those back in from an earlier version, adjusting opacity and adding grain, to match the overall texture as close as I could, which as you will see, is not quite close enough.

I am seeing the value in taking the same shots at different focal lengths, though of course action shots like this don't oblige.

Thanks, Thorne, for the points you make.

Neil

NeilL
Oct-09-2009, 03:39 AM
Edit, but given the limitations of this close crop from 10MP 40D, this is about as far as I can go with it in this direction ; )



http://neilal.smugmug.com/photos/674904541_akY6K-XL.jpg





Neil