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KevXman
Sep-17-2009, 04:09 PM
Take Me To Your Leader
http://photosbykevin.smugmug.com/photos/652710063_xKkNN-L.jpg

Thoughts?

Thanks for looking.
— Kevin

MarkR
Sep-17-2009, 04:28 PM
It's good, but feels a little static, not quite conveying the idea of movement. I like the idea of freezing motion, but it's not clear to me if motion is frozen, or if the spring just wore down. :dunno

adbsgicom
Sep-17-2009, 05:28 PM
The shadow of its movement is too faint. I think you need a bit more trailing action.

ic4u
Sep-18-2009, 04:56 AM
:agree The shadow of its movement is too faint. I think you need a bit more trailing action.