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douglas
Jun-29-2005, 09:41 AM
Just a simple shot taken under a covered rest area on a bike trail.

Taken on 3-27-05
F 2.8
1/20 sec
converted to b&w

Best regards,
douglas

4labs
Jun-29-2005, 10:16 AM
Just a simple shot taken under a covered rest area on a bike trail.

Taken on 3-27-05
F 2.8
1/20 sec
converted to b&w

Best regards,
douglas
It might be simple but its very well done!

douglas
Jun-29-2005, 08:12 PM
It might be simple but its very well done!Thank you 4labs, I appreciate your viewing and comments.

Best regards,
douglas

thegreenegg
Jun-30-2005, 02:11 AM
A very nice black and white image. The lines are very appealing and the image is just very crisp.
Ashley

hesaias
Jun-30-2005, 04:00 AM
Awesome! The angles are very appealing to the eye. Nice crisp lines.

DeanMcM
Jun-30-2005, 06:56 AM
I think this is great. :thumb

Higgmeister
Jun-30-2005, 08:11 AM
I also like this shot. 3 or thirds keep repeating here, whether accidental or intentional, and is a nice effect. The only thing I could suggest would be to crop for more symmetry, if you can. The boards that make up the "Y", put the top left line into the corner and the bottom to equidistance in the frame. Not sure if your original could pull this off, but I think it would add some to the shot.

Just my .02 to an already good shot,
Chris

Angelo
Jun-30-2005, 08:12 AM
nice job on the conversion. very crisp. :thumb

douglas
Jun-30-2005, 09:05 AM
I also like this shot. 3 or thirds keep repeating here, whether accidental or intentional, and is a nice effect. The only thing I could suggest would be to crop for more symmetry, if you can. The boards that make up the "Y", put the top left line into the corner and the bottom to equidistance in the frame. Not sure if your original could pull this off, but I think it would add some to the shot.

Just my .02 to an already good shot,
ChrisHi Chris, Unfortunately this is the full frame I tried doing some cropping but I ended up unsatisfied with the results so I left it as shot. But I do agree with you because after reviewing the photo later the "Y" is what really caught my eye. I think a revisit with my tripod and more time spent composing could improve this alot.

Thank you very much for your input.

Best regards,
douglas

douglas
Jun-30-2005, 09:09 AM
Thank you everyone for comments, much appreciated.
Best regards,
douglas

mel
Jun-30-2005, 04:19 PM
Like it a lot, too! It just has lots of nooks and angles to explore. Good depth.
~mel