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thoth
Aug-16-2009, 08:15 PM
Comments and critique appreciated as usual.

1)
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2481/3828988816_353a8b53a9_o.jpg

2)
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3426/3828189145_f4cdd5d66d_o.jpg

Enjoy!

Flutist
Aug-16-2009, 09:50 PM
I really like them both! I hope you don't my take on your photo, and if you do I'm very sorry and will remove. I find the gentlemen on the left to be distracting. I think a crop more like what I did below directs the focus back to the "cowboy" amidst modern transportation :wink


http://sbrownphotography.smugmug.com/photos/621967375_jP2nL-L.jpg

thoth
Aug-16-2009, 10:01 PM
I really like them both! I hope you don't my take on your photo, and if you do I'm very sorry and will remove. I find the gentlemen on the left to be distracting. I think a crop more like what I did below directs the focus back to the "cowboy" amidst modern transportation :wink
Thanks for the comment Shannon. You're more than welcome to play with my photos anytime.

Although you're right that your crop draws the attention to the horse and rider they, and the vehicles behind them, are not the full story for me. In order to satisfy B.D.'s challenge for us I'll, for now, refrain from revealing my own thoughts on the image. I did, however, leave the fellow on the left on purpose. I surely appreciate your efforts, though!

Flutist
Aug-16-2009, 10:20 PM
I figured you had for some reason left him. As part of BD's exercise my interpretation was such.....what I would have seen in my mind.....

It does look as though the gentleman on the left is looking at the man on the horse in a sort of "you can't park your horse there" kinda look :rofl or maybe he's holding the watering cup...LOL either way I'm intrigued and can't wait for it to be tomorrow and this exercise over. I like explanations... :)

thoth
Aug-16-2009, 10:25 PM
I figured you had for some reason left him. As part of BD's exercise my interpretation was such.....what I would have seen in my mind..... There's nothing wrong with choosing your own adventure. That's what we're all here for!

It does look as though the gentleman on the left is looking at the man on the horse in a sort of "you can't park your horse there" kinda look :rofl
:rofl

I keep calling it a horse too for some reason but I recall, later in the day, hearing the rider scold a child and saying, "that ain't no horse -- it's a mule." :rofl

Wil Davis
Aug-16-2009, 11:07 PM
#1: Wow, there's a dude I wouldn't like to mess with… …reminds me of this: http://www.entertonement.com/clips/yggsssmbtj--My-mule-thinks-you're-laughing-at-himJoe-Clint-Eastwood-A-Fistful-of-Dollars- (http://www.entertonement.com/clips/yggsssmbtj--My-mule-thinks-you%27re-laughing-at-himJoe-Clint-Eastwood-A-Fistful-of-Dollars-)

BTW I think the guy on the left balances the picture, else it's too centered (IMNSHO)

#2: What a great hat! (the nerd-pack looks slightly incongruous though…) - could do with more light on his face, although I understand it was probably a grabbed shot…

Nice, thanks for sharing -
- Wil

thoth
Aug-17-2009, 07:07 AM
Haha, thanks for the reply Wil. This fellow is a pretty typical Missouri farmer so, yeah, he's probably tougher than ol' Clint. :rofl

I think I lost a little of the light on the fellows face, in the second photo, during the B&W conversion. I'll see if I can't lighten it back up a bit when I have a few minutes.

adbsgicom
Aug-17-2009, 07:48 AM
Love the guys expression on 1. "Don't make me get off this horse, and come over there...." The cast of characters on 2 are great. Per Wil's comment, perhaps a square crop would get the one lady out of the image w/o losing the vertical interest?

thoth
Aug-17-2009, 07:55 AM
Love the guys expression on 1. "Don't make me get off this horse, and come over there...." The cast of characters on 2 are great. Per Wil's comment, perhaps a square crop would get the one lady out of the image w/o losing the vertical interest?

Thanks for the comments, Andrew. Which lady are you referring to in #2?

adbsgicom
Aug-17-2009, 08:00 AM
Thanks for the comments, Andrew. Which lady are you referring to in #2?

THe one at the far left just looking back. She's not really part of the story (at least my story :D )

thoth
Aug-17-2009, 08:12 AM
THe one at the far left just looking back. She's not really part of the story (at least my story :D )

Gotcha. :thumb I think I could see how she could be taken or left. Thanks for the suggestion!

richtersl
Aug-17-2009, 09:13 AM
I like #1 just "as is". It's actually quite humorous to see the mule and rider in a parking spot reserved for a car. The fact that the rider is not paying one bit of attention to what the guy on the ground is saying also made me smile.

Jack'll do
Aug-17-2009, 09:42 AM
I too love the first one "as is". The mule adds a bit of humor that would be absent if he was riding a horse. :D

thoth
Aug-17-2009, 10:50 AM
I too love the first one "as is". The mule adds a bit of humor that would be absent if he was riding a horse. :D

Thanks!

bdcolen
Aug-17-2009, 11:31 AM
I really like them both! I hope you don't my take on your photo, and if you do I'm very sorry and will remove. I find the gentlemen on the left to be distracting. I think a crop more like what I did below directs the focus back to the "cowboy" amidst modern transportation :wink


http://sbrownphotography.smugmug.com/photos/621967375_jP2nL-L.jpg


Wrong, wrong, wrong!:rofl The figure on the left, with his stance, the cup on his hip, and his gaze, makes the photo. Otherwise, it's just a guy on a mule with parked cars, not much.