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christinamae
Jul-09-2009, 07:41 AM
Here is another one from Balboa Park

http://i82.photobucket.com/albums/j252/cklawrie/WaterLily-DSC_0167-web.jpg

Comments appreciated! Thank you for looking!
Eia
Jul-09-2009, 09:01 AM
such vibrant colors!!!! Very pretty.
AaronNelson
Jul-09-2009, 09:17 AM
what a great capture, the color is so so sweet!

I would try to clone out the upper left yellow lillypad using the upper right section of frame...but that just me....

and maybe some of the bird droppings too...

( I guess im a cloneaholic)
christinamae
Jul-09-2009, 08:48 PM
such vibrant colors!!!! Very pretty.

Thank you Eia!
christinamae
Jul-09-2009, 08:50 PM
what a great capture, the color is so so sweet!

I would try to clone out the upper left yellow lillypad using the upper right section of frame...but that just me....

and maybe some of the bird droppings too...

( I guess im a cloneaholic)

Thank you Aaron! I appreciate the feedback... I'll try some cloning this weekend. I'll let you know how it turns out.
AaronNelson
Jul-10-2009, 06:52 AM
or maybe instead of cloning out that lilly pad just change the tone a little more to the green side:dunno


or just leave everything as it is:thumb
wfeller
Jul-10-2009, 06:58 AM
Very crisp and clear- Pretty.

I think the top cropped off to 4:5 to above the flower on the upper right, and whatever remaing on the bottom, it'd look even better.

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dlplumer
Jul-10-2009, 07:00 AM
I notice you are not "working on it" anymore. You are just "doing it"

Nice shot :thumb

Dan
christinamae
Jul-10-2009, 11:06 AM
Thank you Aaron, Walter & Dan!

Here is a revised edit. Should I ditch the partial lily pad at the very top?

http://i82.photobucket.com/albums/j252/cklawrie/WaterLily-DSC_0167-NEWEDIT.jpg

Thank you again for the feedback! I REALLY appreciate it. :D
dlplumer
Jul-10-2009, 11:22 AM
I would not. It looks great :clap
christinamae
Jul-11-2009, 01:36 PM
Thank you Dan! I like the new edit better too.