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kdspencer
Jul-08-2009, 05:45 PM
I was at a camp last week and this mist rolled in and stuck around all morning. I grabbed my camera and went out looking for things to take pics of. Here are two that I really liked.
1. I'm looking for some ideas to make this image stronger. Since it was misty, I set my white balance to tungsten to get the moody blue look.
http://kdspencer.smugmug.com/photos/585874529_MnAWs-M-1.jpg
2. This is an HDR composite of the road that leads to the cabins used during kids camp.
http://kdspencer.smugmug.com/photos/585878399_k82fX-M-1.jpg
I appreciate any thoughts or tips for how to make either of these images better.
Thanks!
~Kathleen
kdspencer
Jul-09-2009, 01:32 PM
anyone......?
Azzaro
Jul-09-2009, 04:36 PM
Your pictures would show better if you posted them 600px high or min. 800px wide.
If I were to show the first pic. I would have taken the pic or cropped the pic so the cross dominated the pic. I would have placed the cross in the top third. I think the blue needs to be toned down. You can get the moody look with a little less blue. The cross needs to pop out more.
The second pic is well composed and nicely done......:thumb
azzaro
lazarkl
Jul-09-2009, 04:47 PM
I enjoyed them both. I particularly liked the colors and the composition of the HDR. Both are very painterly.
Skippy
Jul-12-2009, 12:39 AM
I was at a camp last week and this mist rolled in and stuck around all morning. I grabbed my camera and went out looking for things to take pics of. Here are two that I really liked.
1. I'm looking for some ideas to make this image stronger. Since it was misty, I set my white balance to tungsten to get the moody blue look.
2. This is an HDR composite of the road that leads to the cabins used during kids camp.
I appreciate any thoughts or tips for how to make either of these images better.
Thanks!
~Kathleen
Hi Kathleen
I like your moody Blue processing of the first image.
Had to look twice to see if it was a Cross or a mast off a boat :D
The Kids camp area looks inviting, the road leads nicely into the image.
Thanks for sharing :thumb .... Skippy :D
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kdspencer
Jul-15-2009, 11:50 AM
Thanks everyone for your comments.
Azzaro, this is the original image of the cross. I've cropped it much closer, and I didn't do anything to it in terms of the blue-tint, or add the water.
Given your prior suggestions, what would you do with this image to make it go from interesting to excellent?
Thanks!
Kathleen
kdspencer
Jul-15-2009, 11:51 AM
Oops, here's the image. (sorry)
http://kdspencer.smugmug.com/photos/592077534_VXhst-M.jpg
Oops, here's the image. (sorry)
http://kdspencer.smugmug.com/photos/592077534_VXhst-M.jpg
I like this!!! But I think it would look good in black and white too; might give it a moodier feel?
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