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jvgphoto
Jun-25-2009, 12:17 PM
Out in the streets...
Big event in a small town...Prom March
Freeport High School - Freeport, ILhttp://jvgphoto.smugmug.com/photos/527462746_mdP6S-L.jpg

Photosbychuck
Jun-29-2009, 06:28 AM
Nice shot of the guy in whie but I wish we could see all of his date.

bdcolen
Jun-29-2009, 06:57 AM
Out in the streets...
Big event in a small town...Prom March
Freeport High School - Freeport, ILhttp://jvgphoto.smugmug.com/photos/527462746_mdP6S-L.jpg

Very nicely done - I see plenty of his date.:-) But, if your intent was to show us that this is a parade, in the street, you either needed to pull back, or give us another shot; if I hadn't read your description, I'd think these people were in a school gym, or some similar indoor space.

But again, I like this image...though I'd prefer it in black and white...:D

bdcolen
Jun-29-2009, 06:58 AM
Very nicely done - I see plenty of his date.:-) But, if your intent was to show us that this is a parade, in the street, you either needed to pull back, or give us another shot; if I hadn't read your description, I'd think these people were in a school gym, or some similar indoor space.

But again, I like this image...though I'd prefer it in black and white...:D

Hopefully the image is here

jvgphoto
Jun-29-2009, 07:25 AM
Very nicely done - I see plenty of his date.:-) But, if your intent was to show us that this is a parade, in the street, you either needed to pull back, or give us another shot; if I hadn't read your description, I'd think these people were in a school gym, or some similar indoor space.

But again, I like this image...though I'd prefer it in black and white...:D

Thank you, sir, for taking the time to comment and help. It means a lot to me as I greatly admire your work and experience in photography and pj. Your point is well made as to pulling back a little bit - I'll submit another shot that provides a little more context.

With great thanks,
Jon

jvgphoto
Jun-29-2009, 07:26 AM
Hopefully the image is here

Yeah, I see what you mean! Thanks for the lesson.

Sincerely,
Jon