Wedding Shoot

[soloshooter]

Here is a pic of last week's wedding of a young couple, I would like to get any C & C from the masses...http://soloshots.smugmug.com/photos/565255502_xLfGM-L-1.jpghttp://soloshots.smugmug.com/photos/566221358_CXSe6-L-1.jpghttp://soloshots.smugmug.com/photos/565255591_LJ4e2-L-1.jpg

[mercphoto]

Nice composition in the first shot, but the bride isn't smiling. Also, we can't see the bride's hand and that all-important ring. Careful with the crop next time. Second shot doesn't do much for me. That third shot, exposure is way off, white balance is way off. You really need to fix that.

[bdcolen]

Here is a pic of last week's wedding of a young couple, I would like to get any C & C from the masses...http://soloshots.smugmug.com/photos/565255502_xLfGM-L-1.jpghttp://soloshots.smugmug.com/photos/566221358_CXSe6-L-1.jpghttp://soloshots.smugmug.com/photos/565255591_LJ4e2-L-1.jpg


Second and third shots are very nice, but I'm thrown by the color of the third. As to the first - I would definitely lose it...the bride looks like she wants to kill the groom or the photographer. :wink (But nice pose, and great of the groom.)