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windoze
Jun-16-2005, 05:42 PM
not as detailed, but i was after composition.....
opinions welcomed!
troy
http://windoze.smugmug.com/photos/25211500-M.jpg

TristanP
Jun-16-2005, 05:54 PM
Works for me. I like it.

bfjr
Jun-16-2005, 08:18 PM
Looked at it scrolled away came back
1st thing came to mind was a little more contrast, otherwise another winner :thumb

Lord Vetinari
Jun-16-2005, 10:10 PM
Yup like it a lot- as previously mentioned think it would be better if darkened a tad.

Brian V.

nzmacro
Jun-16-2005, 11:32 PM
You've been playing with the thirds and perspective huh, well it worked. Nice balanced in this almost squared crop. Have to love the subject with those gorgeous metallic colours Troy. The curves and lines work well and you have a great separation from the background. Darker, hmmm, worth a try but as is its fine as well.

All the best Troy, nicely balanced this one :thumb

Danny.

Dee
Jun-17-2005, 12:27 AM
You've been playing with the thirds and perspective huh, well it worked. Nice balanced in this almost squared crop. Have to love the subject with those gorgeous metallic colours Troy. The curves and lines work well and you have a great separation from the background. Darker, hmmm, worth a try but as is its fine as well.

All the best Troy, nicely balanced this one :thumb

Danny.

This would make a lovely print as is, soft colors, iridescent glimmers on the wings of the fly -- but for the web, I'd pump up the contrast just a little.

I really love the colors, and the tip of the leaf leading away from the fly brings the eye back to the fly -- :clap