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BroPhoto
Jun-06-2009, 04:52 PM
This is the top of a monument on the square here in Millersburg. It is a monument in memory of those who gave their life during the wars when Millersburg was being formed. I sorta like this view because the blossoms on the trees sorta frame the figure.
What do you think? Should this one be converted to B/W? As always, C&C always welcomed. How else am I supposed to improve? :D
http://brophoto.smugmug.com/photos/553434294_kPhKK-M.jpg
GaryB
thapamd
Jun-07-2009, 05:28 AM
Hi Gary,
I really like the perspective too. I think you did a great job with what you had to work with. I see a lot of shadow detail and nice highlights as well. As you mentioned, the natural framing is wonderful. I don't think you'd gain anything by converting it to b&w.
rutt
Jun-07-2009, 05:49 AM
You need to do a better job in post with this before you can really answer the B&W question. The version you posted has a slight green cast and is somewhat overexposed and thus too light. I did my best fast job with it in both color and B&W. Now it's a fair comparison:
http://rutt.smugmug.com/photos/556873414_szUHe-L.jpg
In this case, I'd have to give it to the color version. There is just too little contrast between the statue and the background in B&W. When I was doing the conversion, I tried to emphasize the contrast, but even so...
BroPhoto
Jun-07-2009, 08:54 PM
Thanks for the replies. I will try and re-shoot this on my next day off, but early in the morning. The shot I posted was taken during the late afternoon, and the sun was behind and to the right of the statue. I'm thinking if I get a shot just as the sun is rising, I should be able to get a better effect. If I remember right, there's an old time street light fairly close to it. I might try and get a shot at night time as well, using the street light as the light source.
Now that I finally received Apeture 2, I will now be shooting in RAW. Up untill now, I've been shooting in JPG Fine, and editing in Picasa. I am taking the manual for Apeture to work with me, and reading it on my breaks and lunch time, so I know what it is capable of. I'll probably be asking for help when I run into something I don't quite understand.
GaryB
BroPhoto
Jun-07-2009, 09:01 PM
Here's one I found of the statue (in the park) during early spring when the cherry blossoms were in full bloom. I think the one I posted earlier was taken before the cherry trees were in bloom.
http://brophoto.smugmug.com/photos/553429163_QDAgk-M.jpg
What do you think of this one?
GaryB
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