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enspyre
May-07-2009, 04:30 PM
compilation of some of my street work
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3365/3474824931_9fb3c41c4a_o.jpg
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3358/3474822253_0a1288727d_o.jpg
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3393/3506030151_73461edd5b.jpg?v=0
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3542/3477769522_6cc370fb61_o.jpg
critique appreciated
thanks
Richard
May-08-2009, 02:59 AM
Hi Nick and welcome to Dgrin :wave. Nice work. I especially like #2. Is the last one meant to be a poster? It's a clever idea. One nit is that the shoe insert tends to blend with the main shot. Perhaps swapping it with one of the lighter toned shots would work better. Another thing I find a little distracting is the lower right corner looks as if it has a piece missing. My eye wants it to be square. :dunno
Looking forward to seeing more of your work.
Nikolai
May-08-2009, 11:44 AM
Hi Nick and welcome to Dgrin :wave. Nice work. I especially like #2. Is the last one meant to be a poster? It's a clever idea. One nit is that the shoe insert tends to blend with the main shot. Perhaps swapping it with one of the lighter toned shots would work better. Another thing I find a little distracting is the lower right corner looks as if it has a piece missing. My eye wants it to be square. :dunno
Looking forward to seeing more of your work.
+1 :agree
Mlark1128
May-08-2009, 11:46 AM
I also agree with the previous CC. Love your moody, artistic style!
austinstrobist
May-08-2009, 04:14 PM
Very interesting PP technique.
enspyre
May-08-2009, 04:26 PM
thanks for the comments everyone i appreciate it
i'll do some work on the last one and post it up later
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