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Rufio220
Jun-02-2005, 08:26 PM
These are are a few sites i see as a high schooler in the photographic world.

Rufio220
Jun-02-2005, 08:30 PM
heres another.

Rufio220
Jun-02-2005, 08:30 PM
heres the Oregon coast

Rufio220
Jun-02-2005, 08:31 PM
heres some street.

Rufio220
Jun-02-2005, 08:58 PM
can any one give me some feed back:dunno

ian408
Jun-02-2005, 09:40 PM
#1 Nothing exciting about this. Perhaps frame the shot so the subject is
looking at something we can see or get a hint of.

#2 This has some possibility. I would shoot this WA and try to do something
with angles.

#3 Looks like something interesting on the beach. Certainly not one of those
glass floats :D Your subject is missing feet. From a framing perspective,
the person sitting on the beach should have been blocked out before making
the image. Also, a bit more face would be good.

Do you have some more close up shots of the object people seem to be
looking at?

#4 Tables. Again, I think shooting with WA might make it more interesting.
Look across the street at the coffe shop. I bet that would yield some cool
street shots, as would the tables, with people congregating around them.


You're on a good track in that you're taking pictures and asking for critique.
Hopefully, this doesn't come off as too harsh as it's not meant to be.

Looking forward to more shots from OR!

Ian

Rufio220
Jun-03-2005, 10:29 PM
here's look'n to look'n up.

Rufio220
Jun-03-2005, 10:30 PM
Olie