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ic4u
Mar-31-2009, 08:15 AM
Hi everyone, been out of town but finally got a chance to work on this.
Wondering what anyone thinks...should I go with it??Improvements?? or should I try something else.
Your opinions are greatly appreciated.
Thanks, Karin

http://ic4u.smugmug.com/photos/502748971_n3f6m-M-1.jpg
Tango
Mar-31-2009, 08:25 AM
great perspective and feels just right for your discriptions...

my only thought would to add a BG color box to the "Journey" same as you have behind the lower discription....

i think the grass conflicts with the titles letters


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divamum
Mar-31-2009, 09:55 AM
Very nice! Pedantic note: you left out an apostrophe - it should be "teen's" :D
dnie
Mar-31-2009, 10:08 AM
Great photo and concept!!! Just the way the feet are placed, to me, tells a part of the story right there. It is a book I would pick up and read.
Cygnus Studios
Mar-31-2009, 10:28 AM
Looks like an easy book to judge by its cover :thumb
ic4u
Mar-31-2009, 11:12 AM
Wow, thanks everyone for your encouraging comments!:D

Aaron, I see what you are saying...I will play around with it some more and see if I can do it justice. Thanks for your advice!

Diva-okay, I must admit I had to dictionary.com the word pedantic!
I was hoping someone would correct me if I was wrong, because I wasn't 100% sure, so thank you, thank you!

Donna and Cygnus studios, thanks for your feedback! I'm glad it comes across as I had hoped.
Tylwydd
Apr-01-2009, 06:33 AM
Nice cover ! Agree with AaronNelson on the bg box. It's a book I'd look at (if not buy)
ic4u
Apr-01-2009, 04:44 PM
Nice cover ! Agree with AaronNelson on the bg box. It's a book I'd look at (if not buy)

Thanks Sam, I did make some adjustments and entered my photo, but I seem to be having a stumbling block envisioning the BG for the title, and therefore everything I've tried looks dumb! I will keep playing around with it as time permits... thanks for the feedback!
Tango
Apr-01-2009, 05:28 PM
then maybe clone out some of the grass that is up there:dunno
ic4u
Apr-01-2009, 06:02 PM
then maybe clone out some of the grass that is up there:dunno

That is one of the adjustments I made on my entry, can you look at it and tell me if it is better?

ETA...entry is on page 2
Drin
Apr-01-2009, 06:49 PM
I think it's really good. Maybe too good... :rolleyes
ic4u
Apr-02-2009, 03:27 AM
I think it's really good. Maybe too good... :rolleyes

Oh, you are much to kind!, thank you for the compliment:D