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dlplumer
Jan-16-2009, 09:22 PM
http://dlplumer.smugmug.com/photos/456103169_MZvfe-XL.jpg

KurtPreston
Jan-17-2009, 05:42 AM
Nice! I just love that background. Beautiful light, great detail and sharpness. Well done!

Ric Grupe
Jan-17-2009, 07:01 AM
This is a very nice shot with very interesting elements.:thumb

I would like to see more room to the left of the bird if possible. If not...maybe you could add some canvas.

ilbcnu
Jan-17-2009, 07:21 AM
Dan, I am not a huge bird person but I keep coming back to this post. Something "regal" about it. Great light, background and sharp. :clap

SciurusNiger
Jan-17-2009, 08:31 AM
This is great, all the way around. I like the background, the frozen water detail, and the clarity of the rather scruffy little finch. :D

I only wish there was a little more space to the left, it "feels" a tad crowded in the frame. Is a landscape orientation possible?

dlplumer
Jan-17-2009, 02:15 PM
Nice! I just love that background. Beautiful light, great detail and sharpness. Well done!

Thanks Kurt:thumb

IraRunyan
Jan-17-2009, 03:15 PM
Outstanding Image :clap :clap

The background and foreground elements were well thought out to make a top notch phoyograph. Job well done.....

bfjr
Jan-17-2009, 03:36 PM
Looks like the finch is going to Church :dunno :D

dlplumer
Jan-18-2009, 08:27 AM
This is a very nice shot with very interesting elements.:thumb

I would like to see more room to the left of the bird if possible. If not...maybe you could add some canvas.

Thanks Ric. What do you mean by "add some canvas"

dlplumer
Jan-18-2009, 09:02 AM
This is great, all the way around. I like the background, the frozen water detail, and the clarity of the rather scruffy little finch. :D

I only wish there was a little more space to the left, it "feels" a tad crowded in the frame. Is a landscape orientation possible?

Thanks so much SN. Here is another attempt.

http://dlplumer.smugmug.com/photos/456927957_nWrNZ-XL.jpg

dlplumer
Jan-18-2009, 09:17 AM
Dan, I am not a huge bird person but I keep coming back to this post. Something "regal" about it. Great light, background and sharp. :clap

Thanks Amanda. Where in AZ are you?

Ric Grupe
Jan-18-2009, 09:54 AM
Thanks Ric. What do you mean by "add some canvas"
There is more than one way to do this...but this (http://ontfin.com/Word/photoshop-tutorial-adding-canvas-to-an-image/) will explain one way.

BTW...your new posting of this shot is better...IMO

bhowdy
Jan-18-2009, 12:40 PM
Oh nice .... Now you are keeping birds in the house?! Almost like Harry's bird on a stick!

Wonderful image and composition. Excellent.

dlplumer
Jan-18-2009, 03:27 PM
There is more than one way to do this...but this (http://ontfin.com/Word/photoshop-tutorial-adding-canvas-to-an-image/) will explain one way.

BTW...your new posting of this shot is better...IMO

Thanks Ric:thumb

dlplumer
Jan-18-2009, 08:23 PM
Oh nice .... Now you are keeping birds in the house?! Almost like Harry's bird on a stick!

Wonderful image and composition. Excellent.

Thanks Bob :rofl

SciurusNiger
Jan-18-2009, 08:26 PM
Thanks so much SN. Here is another attempt.


Yes! That's it! Now the eye can "move" easily and sweeps up to meet the bird's eye.

Excellent!

coscorrosa
Jan-18-2009, 11:57 PM
Yes! That's it! Now the eye can "move" easily and sweeps up to meet the bird's eye.

Excellent!

Agreed, I like the second one better. A lot of cool side elements (fountain, ice, silhouetted window) really add to the overall photo, and an excellent capture of the finch as well.

dlplumer
Jan-19-2009, 06:59 AM
Yes! That's it! Now the eye can "move" easily and sweeps up to meet the bird's eye.

Excellent!

Thanks SN. Very much appreciate your coaching :thumb

ilbcnu
Jan-19-2009, 07:19 AM
The second one seems more balanced. Very nice.
Dan, Iam out and about the same areas as you! I think we may be the only Tucsonains? Have you come across any others?
Ric, great link- adding canvas - learned something new again today!!

dlplumer
Jan-19-2009, 02:11 PM
The second one seems more balanced. Very nice.
Dan, Iam out and about the same areas as you! I think we may be the only Tucsonains? Have you come across any others?
Ric, great link- adding canvas - learned something new again today!!

Thanks Amanda. There are lots of us in AZ, but I am not aware of anyone else in the Tucson area. What are your favorite place to shoot in the area?

ilbcnu
Jan-19-2009, 02:27 PM
I live in a rural area North of Marana, east of the 10-so I tend to just wander off our property. I do like to walk through downtown to people watch as well as see the historic/renovated bldgs & homes. I also just read somewhere -have to check it out though - that San Xavier Mission has removed the scaffolding that has been around there for some time due to the renovations -only temporarily so might need to get down there. I see from your pics you are at the water areas. Maybe I'll venture there after I finish saving & acquire the 70-200 2.8 IS -hopefully have it sometime this spring.

dlplumer
Jan-20-2009, 04:45 AM
Agreed, I like the second one better. A lot of cool side elements (fountain, ice, silhouetted window) really add to the overall photo, and an excellent capture of the finch as well.

Thanks Ron, but no ice :rofl

Schnauzer
Jan-20-2009, 06:41 AM
Very nice shot Dan. I think the second one is an improvement over the first.

dlplumer
Jan-20-2009, 03:00 PM
Very nice shot Dan. I think the second one is an improvement over the first.

Thanks Ron. Appreciate the feedback.:D

Hikin' Mike
Jan-20-2009, 04:20 PM
That second one rocks! Love the window "background"!

Maestro
Jan-20-2009, 06:52 PM
Wow, very nice. I too like the second. That is one engaging photo!

dlplumer
Jan-21-2009, 08:07 AM
That second one rocks! Love the window "background"!

Thanks so much Mike

dlplumer
Jan-22-2009, 06:57 AM
Wow, very nice. I too like the second. That is one engaging photo!

Thanks Maestro