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The Curious Camel
Jan-11-2009, 03:42 PM
http://thecuriouscamel.smugmug.com/photos/453209366_YTCin-L-1.jpg

I was thinking of entering this shot for the Challenge ^16


I didn't know where to place this for suggestions so I opted here.

Thank, gail

Llywellyn
Jan-11-2009, 06:43 PM
I like the composition and warmth, but I find myself distracted by the smidge of able on the bottom cutting off the bottom of the frame and the reflection of the lamp in the curtain. I do like those lines in the background, too. :thumb

JAG
Jan-11-2009, 07:04 PM
:agree

Also the lamp is just a smidge leaning to the left. Although I don't know if you can adjust that without loosing the rest of the table edge and bottom of the picture frame.

The Curious Camel
Jan-11-2009, 07:16 PM
I tried to fix the reflection but I would have to reshoot now and I can't
I did try to fix the other things is it any better?

Thanks Kerry and Jag


http://thecuriouscamel.smugmug.com/photos/453382296_QbaWn-L.jpg