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jwear
Jan-04-2009, 08:49 PM
what do you think of a simple house finch :dunno
kdog
Jan-04-2009, 09:01 PM
I think it's freakin' outstanding! :bow

Cheers,
-joel
dlplumer
Jan-05-2009, 07:58 AM
Great shot Jeff (maybe a tad over sharpened?) :clap
WildWally
Jan-05-2009, 08:00 AM
Beautiful !!!
KurtPreston
Jan-05-2009, 09:57 AM
Super! I'm thinking you could probably use the dodge tool to even out the slightly harsh light on the bird and the cactus ... that could take this up a notch :)
bhowdy
Jan-05-2009, 01:30 PM
A very nice shot. As others have said, maybe just a tad "hot." :thumb
bfjr
Jan-05-2009, 02:41 PM
It is a tad hot, but only on the background which causes
it to be distracting. Tone it down a smidge and your good
to go.
jeffmeyers
Jan-05-2009, 03:19 PM
It is a tad hot, but only on the background which causes
it to be distracting. Tone it down a smidge and your good
to go.

:agree
jwear
Jan-05-2009, 05:48 PM
ok I have read and still I ponder but a small finch fix I did try :dunno and thank you for the feedback :thumb
Harryb
Jan-06-2009, 01:59 PM
You did well Jeff. :clap My only nit would be to gvve it a bit more space to frame right.
jwear
Jan-06-2009, 04:05 PM
You did well Jeff. :clap My only nit would be to gvve it a bit more space to frame right.

I do agree
Maestro
Jan-06-2009, 04:38 PM
A simple house finch on an interesting perch. Other than the first posting being a tad hot, the second one looks nicer as the hot areas look toned down. As Harry said, if you have some space to the right, its composition may look better.
raptorcaptor
Jan-06-2009, 08:54 PM
Nice shot of a House Finch on a cactus. If you had moved the cactus to the right a bit, the finch would have been perfectly posed. :dunno