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Travis
Jan-01-2009, 09:20 AM
C&C welcomed. Happy New Year!

http://owney.smugmug.com/photos/446438761_6Khhx-L-1.jpg

jstpeter
Jan-01-2009, 10:46 AM
I think I see what you were going for with the contrasting vertical horizontal and diagonal lines and the red and blue tones but the title confuses me. I guess this is an officers club but the fence in front blocks the scene and hence the club can no longer be considered the subject of the photo. The lines do have my eyes jumping from top to bottom and side to side but I keep looking for something and don't see it. Maybe a little further explanation may help me with this one.

Travis
Jan-01-2009, 11:39 AM
Thanks for the input jst. I don't usually do abstracts arch images but I liked the lines and the depth to this. The title is not really representative of the image but more of the location. It is a Navy officers club that sits on the oceanfront. The red fence fence separates it from the surrounding public land.

Jack'll do
Jan-04-2009, 03:56 AM
Hi Travis
I love the colors and sense of depth in this one. Too bad the fence is so close to the building or you would have been able to show more of the portico.