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LiquidOps
May-06-2005, 08:50 AM
Greetings all :)

These pictures are kind of old, but I think they are pretty nice. I haven't been able to get out and shoot much lately, so i've been cycling through some of my old photos to see what I like and don't like. Also, trying to fine tune my PS skills.

This is my best friend (who now lives in MI) and his g/f. We were down at Corona Del Mar beach and the lighting was very nice.

Trying to get my portfolio together and could use some feedback.

http://WanderingThroughLife.smugmug.com/photos/21382336-L.jpg

http://WanderingThroughLife.smugmug.com/photos/21382346-L.jpg

http://WanderingThroughLife.smugmug.com/photos/21382377-L.jpg

http://WanderingThroughLife.smugmug.com/photos/21382406-L.jpg

Thanks,

Steven

MuskyDude
May-06-2005, 10:10 AM
I cannot offer you any critiques on how to improve these. But, I can say which ones I like and why, right? But please take my words for what they are worth...

I love the lighting on #1. I think its great as is.

2 Maybe it's a bit flat? Not that it's bad...

3 Love the use of fillflash, I think this one is excellent!

4 I would crop a bit of the (her?) bottom of this, and it's a good passionate kiss shot I'm sure they'd love...

Again take my words with a grain of salt. Excellent series, I would hope to do so good...! Have you shared them with your friends yet?

AJ

USAIR
May-06-2005, 11:11 AM
:agree With AJ # 2 is little flat but others are great
Very nice photos of a good looking couple :thumb

Thanks
Fred

coldclimb
May-06-2005, 11:29 AM
Hehehe, #4 is definitely cool! I think it probably COULD use a crop though. Nice stuff!

Phil U.
May-06-2005, 12:00 PM
:agree sorry to be a copycat, but I agree with those above. Hope you don't mind, I took a quick & dirty stab at my thought for the crop...