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VelvtRide
Oct-03-2008, 05:02 PM
#1 - Fire in the Sky
http://velvtride.smugmug.com/photos/385878375_s7LPG-M.jpg


#2 - Morning Flight
http://velvtride.smugmug.com/photos/385878318_kzoFR-M.jpg


#3 - Twilight Tree
http://velvtride.smugmug.com/photos/385878274_Jq3zR-M.jpg

Opinions? :ear
pyroPrints.com
Oct-03-2008, 05:47 PM
#1 is good though that wire is distracting (reshoot possible?)
ic4u
Oct-03-2008, 05:56 PM
Of the 3 I would have to pick #3, I like the composition, and the warm tone.
The other two are good, but in #1, I wish the opening was a bit larger, so
there wasn't as much black filling up the image. Great title for it though!
#2 has great color captured on the butterfly, but the white pole/post on the right is a bit distracting. Just my thoughts, hope this helps!
VelvtRide
Oct-03-2008, 06:15 PM
Thanks for the feedback! :thumb

A reshoot is possible on #1, but it'd have the same power lines in it.:cry I'm really not in a good place(nor can I get to one at this time) for a good dusk or dawn pic of the sun. I've been struggling with out of the box shots and it's getting to the point of not being fun - so instead of pushing it, I've decided to take what I've got and try to make a go of it. :D

Here's another shot of #2 if this is any better?

http://velvtride.smugmug.com/photos/385878333_SiFDN-M.jpg
ic4u
Oct-03-2008, 06:16 PM
:thumb
JAG
Oct-03-2008, 08:59 PM
I like the 2nd butterfly shot...beautiful...but #3 speaks the theme better and is a wonderful composition!
VelvtRide
Oct-03-2008, 09:49 PM
I like the 2nd butterfly shot...beautiful...but #3 speaks the theme better and is a wonderful composition!

That's the worst part for me.... :bash


I love the butterfly because it's a much better shot than the others, but doesn't fit the theme as well.


Arrrrrrrrghhhhhhhhhh!!


(P.S. thanks for the input! :lol3)
richtersl
Oct-04-2008, 07:36 AM
Can you get back to the spot where you took the "Twlight Tree" shot? That place looks like it has potential. Is there a possibility of getting a shot from there with some long shadows in it? :scratch
VelvtRide
Oct-04-2008, 08:19 AM
Can you get back to the spot where you took the "Twlight Tree" shot? That place looks like it has potential. Is there a possibility of getting a shot from there with some long shadows in it? :scratch

Nope and nope. :cry