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swintonphoto
Oct-01-2008, 08:06 PM
Hey everyone - Here are a few of my attempts. Any thoughts on ones that work better?

1.
http://jswinton.smugmug.com/photos/384808630_DXWoq-L.jpg

2.
http://jswinton.smugmug.com/photos/384811344_sJj94-L.jpg

3.
http://jswinton.smugmug.com/photos/384814984_E9x8C-L.jpg

4.
http://jswinton.smugmug.com/photos/384814217_ho5Bf-L.jpg

5.
http://jswinton.smugmug.com/photos/384810083_jMYjE-L.jpg

6.
http://jswinton.smugmug.com/photos/384810962_DZYWM-L.jpg
JAG
Oct-01-2008, 08:14 PM
I like the composition on all of them. And the 1 and 4 really stand out ...but I love 1 the most. Looks nice and clear plus love the moon! You seem to have quite a bit of haze where you live huh?
Travis
Oct-01-2008, 08:23 PM
#1 by far. The colors and contrast work really well. The rest, will nice compositions, fall flat to me and don't have the pop of #1.
swintonphoto
Oct-01-2008, 09:04 PM
Thanks for your input Jag & Travis. Jag, you are right - it is misty around here almost every morning. I kind of like it.
dlplumer
Oct-01-2008, 09:23 PM
#1 by far. The colors and contrast work really well. The rest, will nice compositions, fall flat to me and don't have the pop of #1.
:nod
shatch
Oct-01-2008, 10:48 PM
I'm a 1 and 5 vote. Great series.
quark
Oct-01-2008, 11:06 PM
#5. I like the soft glow look. It is more unique than #1 compared to the other entries so far.
peterst6906
Oct-02-2008, 12:36 AM
#5. I like the soft glow look. It is more unique than #1 compared to the other entries so far.

I agree with this. #1 has good clarity and contrast, but I think it runs the risk of missing out in the judging because it could be difficult to distinguish it from a couple of existing entries.

Regards,

Peter
richtersl
Oct-02-2008, 05:11 AM
I'm a 1 and 5 vote. Great series.

:agree
divamum
Oct-02-2008, 06:24 AM
:agree

1, 2 (which is probably as much to do with the subject as the photo - I just like it) and 5, with the nod going to #5 for me.

That said, they're all gorgeous - yet another set of images captured for this challenge to inspire me and make me want to go out and shoot some more!
eoren1
Oct-02-2008, 10:05 AM
I'm going to join the minority and vote for 2. Great shot, great colors. Only wish you were allowed to clone at that really distracting line in the lower left corner...
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AaronNelson
Oct-02-2008, 10:37 AM
Im all for #6 composition but with different light...
reshoot, get some gold in there....

#4&5 i think that parking area is a big distraction....


my .02