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Dwayne Oakes
Sep-24-2008, 07:28 PM
Thanks for taking a look. Jpeg no pp, Nikon D80/Nikkor 18-70mm.

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DonRicklin
Sep-25-2008, 02:50 AM
Great composition. I like how it takes a moment to realize that there is a smaller rivulet fall on the left side of the image.

B&W does this image justice. Not much to critique on this one, other than maybe bringing out a little more local contrast in the water at the bottom, so it is not such a flat area compared to the roughness of the rock texture.

Don

Dwayne Oakes
Sep-25-2008, 06:58 PM
Thanks for the comments Don !

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Miguel Delinquento
Sep-28-2008, 09:41 AM
I too really enjoy this shot. Great exposure and movement, and excellent decision to go B&W.
I would be curious about seeing a wider frame or I would have considered using a slightly wider focal length. I tend to want to see more areas where the water goes.
Since this shot has no PP, I would really like to see an intensively rendered B&W conversion. It could be a significant improvement or if not, what you got is plenty good.

M

Dwayne Oakes
Sep-28-2008, 07:22 PM
I too really enjoy this shot. Great exposure and movement, and excellent decision to go B&W.
I would be curious about seeing a wider frame or I would have considered using a slightly wider focal length. I tend to want to see more areas where the water goes.
Since this shot has no PP, I would really like to see an intensively rendered B&W conversion. It could be a significant improvement or if not, what you got is plenty good.

M

Thanks for the comments MD

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