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ShepsMom
Sep-24-2008, 04:38 PM
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http://intruecolors.smugmug.com/photos/379740893_KyeHk-L.jpg
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http://intruecolors.smugmug.com/photos/379740483_avLhp-L.jpg
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http://intruecolors.smugmug.com/photos/379742730_72fKg-L.jpg
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http://intruecolors.smugmug.com/photos/379742126_WuJRD-L.jpg
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http://intruecolors.smugmug.com/photos/379741039_mPd5N-L.jpg
Ok, i have a question. My B&W looks like crap! I can't figure it out. I tried different techniques, but nothing really works well. :cry:cry:cry
Help :dunno
http://intruecolors.smugmug.com/photos/379741826_uMVmA-L.jpg
jeffreaux2
Sep-24-2008, 05:08 PM
I like the poses...but wish she were smiling in more of them. Black tops and white trousers make for a tough portrait. The exposures look good as well. Highlights in blonde hair can be hard to control, but you got em.
As for the BWs......They appear to carry a large amount of contrast. It is possible that the color version you converted from had too much contrast. Maybe try converting from the out of camera shot and then adjust contrast.
PineapplePhoto
Sep-24-2008, 05:08 PM
Ok, i have a question. My B&W looks like crap! I can't figure it out. I tried different techniques, but nothing really works well. :cry:cry:cry
Help :dunno
http://intruecolors.smugmug.com/photos/379741039_mPd5N-L.jpg
B&W conversion tutorial -> http://dgrin.smugmug.com/gallery/1126557
I love that picture :)
ShepsMom
Sep-24-2008, 05:10 PM
Thanks Jeff, i'll give it another try, god know for 100th time LOL
As far as her smiling, she doesn't want to smile, don't even ask :rolleyes
jeffreaux2
Sep-24-2008, 05:18 PM
Thanks Jeff, i'll give it another try, god know for 100th time LOL
As far as her smiling, she doesn't want to smile, don't even ask :rolleyes
Ha Ha......been there done that.....and probably will again.
ShepsMom
Sep-24-2008, 05:36 PM
Is this any better? It looks Grey not black to me. :scratch
I want to achieve something and i don't know what. I've seen some B&W that just blow me away, this is just plain as it gets.
http://intruecolors.smugmug.com/photos/379783208_T3mih-L.jpg
jeffreaux2
Sep-24-2008, 06:02 PM
It is much better, but the blacks are still very deep. One other issue may be that her arms are lit brighter than her face. Lighten the blacks some more...and then use subtle...multiple vignettes of differing and irregular shapes and sizes to gradually lead to her face?
I gave it a try, but it would be better to work from the color version.
Ann McRae
Sep-24-2008, 06:15 PM
Marina - do you have Scott Kelby's CS3 book? I tried his BW conversion recipe last night and really like it. pg 242. If you don't maybe I can try to muddle through the explanation.
And I recognize the age/pout.....I wish the kids weren't always trying to act so old!!!
ann
ShepsMom
Sep-24-2008, 06:26 PM
Ann, i don't have his book, i know, i was about to buy one but never did. Would you mind playing with the image if i give you an original?
May be you can tell me what you did, if you have time. I probably should purchase his book.
Thanks for your help!! :bow
ShepsMom
Sep-24-2008, 06:27 PM
It is much better, but the blacks are still very deep. One other issue may be that her arms are lit brighter than her face. Lighten the blacks some more...and then use subtle...multiple vignettes of differing and irregular shapes and sizes to gradually lead to her face?
I gave it a try, but it would be better to work from the color version.
Jeff, i'll send you an original JPEG, unless you want RAW file? How do i send that??
jeffreaux2
Sep-24-2008, 06:31 PM
Jeff, i'll send you an original JPEG, unless you want RAW file? How do i send that??
Just pm me a link to it and allow downloading.
ShepsMom
Sep-24-2008, 06:37 PM
Jeff, you've got PM. :D
Ann McRae
Sep-24-2008, 06:39 PM
Ann, i don't have his book, i know, i was about to buy one but never did. Would you mind playing with the image if i give you an original?
May be you can tell me what you did, if you have time. I probably should purchase his book.
Thanks for your help!! :bow
Hi Marina
Straight from the book:
1. Open color image
2. Press D (sets foreground color to black)
3. Open new adjustment layer and choose 'Gradient Map'
4.Click Ok
5. If you wish to tweak, double click direnctly on the gradient map adjustment layer thimbnail to bring dialog box back
6. Click directly below center of gradient to add color stop (little pointy arrow appears where you clicked)
7. Double click on the color stop - color picker appears. Pick a grey from far right - move curser up & down til you darken or lighten to your satisfaction. You have to let go of mouse button to see changes.
8. Click okay to close color picker.
9. You can now move slider on gradient map to adjust the tone of the image.
10. Optional - change opacity of the layer to give a wash effect.
HTH
ann
jeffreaux2
Sep-24-2008, 07:12 PM
Jeff, you've got PM. :D
Here is my version...slightly tinted...and my blacks got pretty inky when I got it ouside of PS.
http://jkmann.smugmug.com/photos/379846511_dz6iQ-M.jpg
ShepsMom
Sep-24-2008, 07:20 PM
Thanks Jeff, this looks good, the original does look more inky LOL.
:D
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