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Prezwoodz
Apr-30-2005, 11:12 AM
WEll im not doing to hot on this one :) So this is my last try! Wont win i think but it has character.

Taken 04/29/05

Mother Natures Garden
bfjr
Apr-30-2005, 12:14 PM
I like this, the natural lines that are random but in order :thumb

the photo lacks "POP" IMO I think theres what they call atmospheric haze :dunno, and I believe you can fix it, but again I'm not the guy with enough expertise.

I can only tell ya what I see and feel, hope it helps :D
Cameron
Apr-30-2005, 03:04 PM
It's a nice idea - I like it! As the previous post mentions, it could use a little "pop". You could try increasing the contrast a bit (play with the levels). You could also try removing some of the haze. I've had luck using an unsharp mask filter with amount=20 and radius=50 (threshold=0) - with a huge radius like that it acts to increase the contrast. Here's a great article (http://luminous-landscape.com/tutorials/contrast-enhancement.shtml) on the subject.
Prezwoodz
May-01-2005, 01:32 AM
I dont suppose that this one is better? Tweaked a bit.
http://www.flashbubble.com/Prezwoodz/dgrin/trees.jpg
bfjr
May-01-2005, 03:38 AM
YES !! :thumb
ChrisJ
May-01-2005, 11:02 AM
Was this an airplane shot (or copter, balloon?)? I like it, but I think the light may have been a bit too harsh to really bring out the details. Did you use a polarizer? :):

Chris
Prezwoodz
May-01-2005, 08:09 PM
Nope my point and click dosent have any special things ;)

This was actually taken from a peak that we hiked. Bird Ridge. 3500 ft .

This shot is looking across the valley from the top.
davev
May-01-2005, 08:28 PM
Nope my point and click dosent have any special things ;)

This was actually taken from a peak that we hiked. Bird Ridge. 3500 ft .

This shot is looking across the valley from the top.Why not this pic for the challenge?
The peaks, the snow drifts, the colors of the mountains.
I think this one could work.

dave.
Prezwoodz
May-01-2005, 10:34 PM
Hmm i guess its not a bad idea heh. Im gonna try this one though becaues i have spent so much time messing around with it!! haha
willow56
May-04-2005, 04:35 PM
:clap Hmm i guess its not a bad idea heh. Im gonna try this one though becaues i have spent so much time messing around with it!! hahathe mountain shot is very impressive, but i kinda like the field, especially the last version, cause it's different in a dreramy kind of way..