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adrian_k
Apr-26-2005, 11:12 PM
I know it's a cliché, but this challenge was a real challenge for me.

I decided that macro/close-ups would be waaay to easy, but I didn't realise quite how hard it would be to translate patterns that I saw to a photograph.

I have one definate favourite and one maybe out of this bunch.

1) Empty benches.
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v299/Adrian_K/Dsc07211.jpg

2) Long wall
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v299/Adrian_K/Dsc07260.jpg

3) Trees by the Long Water - at the very end is Hampton Court Palace and this is by the man made 'pond' that's about 1km long (you can just make it out on the left)
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v299/Adrian_K/DSC07283.jpg

4) The Ice House - late 17th Century
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v299/Adrian_K/Dsc07302.jpg

5) Cattle Grid
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v299/Adrian_K/Dsc07308.jpg

whad'ya think?

DoctorIt
Apr-27-2005, 12:21 PM
:nod

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v299/Adrian_K/DSC07283.jpg

maybe a slightly tighter crop, a little more contrast. I dig it for the the emptiness while still working a pattern.

And BTW, its challenge 37, I edited your thread title for ya :thumb

lr1811
Apr-27-2005, 12:53 PM
I like your work but I like the bench shot the best. I wish I couldn't see the people in it though, they kindof distract from it.

Brian

Angelo
Apr-27-2005, 01:17 PM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v299/Adrian_K/DSC07283.jpg

maybe a slightly tighter crop, a little more contrast. I dig it for the the emptiness while still working a pattern.
:agree

snapapple
Apr-27-2005, 01:55 PM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v299/Adrian_K/DSC07283.jpg


I like this one. Try a little curves to give it some contrast, maybe crop a little tighter on the right and bottom. It has nice perspective and a good pattern.

adrian_k
Apr-27-2005, 11:30 PM
wow, it wouldn't be my first choice. But as proven by the last challenge, I have 'odd' tastes that are not particularly populist.

Good feedback though, thanks.

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v299/Adrian_K/DSC07283.jpg


I like this one. Try a little curves to give it some contrast, maybe crop a little tighter on the right and bottom. It has nice perspective and a good pattern.

juliejules
Apr-28-2005, 05:31 AM
I know it's a cliché, but this challenge was a real challenge for me.

I decided that macro/close-ups would be waaay to easy, but I didn't realise quite how hard it would be to translate patterns that I saw to a photograph.

I have one definate favourite and one maybe out of this bunch.



2) Long wall
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v299/Adrian_K/Dsc07260.jpg



whad'ya think?
I really like this one because it has 2 repeating patterns, horizontal and vertical, and the I like the perspective. I might experiment with adding contrast.

juliejules
Apr-28-2005, 05:38 AM
I really like this one because it has 2 repeating patterns, horizontal and vertical, and the I like the perspective. I might experiment with adding contrast.
I cropped it, added contrast and sharpened it. It's attached (I hope).

adrian_k
Apr-28-2005, 07:29 AM
That's my favourite too, although I like what you've done, I think you've gone too far.
I think I'll do some more work on this.


I cropped it, added contrast and sharpened it. It's attached (I hope).

DJ-S1
Apr-28-2005, 02:47 PM
Adrian, I hadn't seen this thread before but I saw your submission in the challenge thread. I really like it, but I noticed the title you placed in the border says "TEES" where I expected "TREES". If it's not a typo then disregard this, but if it is then I thought I'd give you a heads up.

adrian_k
Apr-29-2005, 08:30 AM
yeah, it's 'sposed to be 'Trees'.

I've been fiddling and it's down to these two. (I still prefer the wall).

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v299/Adrian_K/Dsc07260_contr_crop.jpg

although I'll edit the title if I l settle with this one
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v299/Adrian_K/7283.jpg

Adrian, I hadn't seen this thread before but I saw your submission in the challenge thread. I really like it, but I noticed the title you placed in the border says "TEES" where I expected "TREES". If it's not a typo then disregard this, but if it is then I thought I'd give you a heads up.