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robandjazzy
Aug-27-2008, 10:55 AM
I meant any critiques? Advice, I only had a 18-135 on this trip, but was able to get this shot fully open at 135, and as close as I could get where the lense would still focus. Any filters anyone would suggest?


http://springerish.smugmug.com/photos/359784713_ByWmz-L.jpg

Awais Yaqub
Aug-27-2008, 12:42 PM
Nice colors i think you focused on the petal i would have focused the Bee, loved the background blur !

MarkR
Aug-27-2008, 12:54 PM
Very nice. But I would consider cropping the right side to get rid of the distracting orange blur. It will also put your subject off-center, which often results in a more pleasing composition.

Awais Yaqub
Aug-27-2008, 12:57 PM
Very nice. But I would consider cropping the right side to get rid of the distracting orange blur. It will also put your subject off-center, which often results in a more pleasing composition.

+1

robandjazzy
Aug-27-2008, 03:42 PM
http://springerish.smugmug.com/photos/359782656_Fd92J-L.jpg

jeffmeyers
Aug-27-2008, 06:51 PM
Good shot. I would darken the background, especially the other red flowers. That would draw the eye to the subject of the capture. Also, you need to crop it a bit so the flower/bee is not in the center. This has a lot of potential. Nice capture!

schmoo
Aug-28-2008, 05:26 AM
Just moving this to Other Cool Shots 'cuz it's flowers :D